comes down to the forty-sixth I've got oaken leaves on the ashen strips and they can't tell by looking in my eyes
there's nothing wrong with a simple life based on anything else in the first forty five but that's not what they want to hear me say
we could chat here for hours about Halo or flowers and there's no shame in liking them both
but at some point you'd ask me to answer the question so you could tell me which was wrong
I retreat to a world made of crystal and pearl with the beautiful boys and the beautiful girls so that I can be friends with whoever I want make a life for myself based on what's in my thoughts and can cry
at the near-perfect world where the people are nice and the morals are closer to black and to white it's a mess– pretty, though and nature and harmony are king
but on earth I'm content to hold ashes of oak and of juniper and hope that no one will ask
and hope that in October the sixth, the forty-sixth won't become a crude joke about X's and Y's
Personal concerns. I know it'll happen (probably already has), but I can still wish it won't.
I have about ten thematic allusions in here. See if you can find them.
Help improve it if you can spare the time- as long as you can explain your reasoning and put up with me potentially playing devil's advocate. Please don't tell me to capitalize the first word of every line though. Many thanks in advance
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